THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I PUBLISH ONE OF MY TALES IN ENGLISH. I 'D LIKE TO GIVE TO ANYONE WILL HAVE THE PLEASURE TO, THE OPPORTUNITY OF RECEIVING AN EMOTION. I APOLOGIZE FOR MY ENGLISH , IF IT IS NOT THAT PERFECT, BUT I REALLY HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY READING MY WRITINGS
WARMEST REGARDS.
ANNA VALENTE
It’s 1.00 o’ clock a.m of a very hot Friday. It’s summertime and the muggy weather is covering people in Manhattan. Tracy is sitting at a table inside Charly’s, on the 44th. Almost every sit is filled of people. Behind the lunch counter the barman is playing freestyle with glasses. Customers push each others to order an old whisky or a beer. There is also the same person who hopes to find a sexy woman and who flings with her by blowing his breath on her neck. At the bottom of the bar, on the top, there is a band playing and the singer is a look-alike of Jimi Hendrix. The waitresses on hostess duty pass among the tables very fast and they gets crazy to take orders using a hand held device. The double doors look like those of a Mexican saloon; they don’t stop to be opened and then shut heavily.
Behind the windows, there is the lightened Broadway: it looks almost magic even if it is frenetic. The street is filled with people coming and going, people walking fast, shy people who gave up and revengeful people, teenagers smiling and drunk people, easy women and people looking for a moment of affection. There are also dogs looking for a new place to pee.
It’s still soon on the Broadway. Music and sounds are noising. Cars speed very fast and there is also who drinks with pleasure by walking down the street.
Daniel wears a short-rocker black leather coat and holds a bottle of beer.
He enters Charly’s bar, wants to eat a cheeseburger. He just wants to make his stomach feel full, to reduce the high alcoholic level and to listen to a good music. He passes by the tables and takes a seat right in front of Tracy.
She holds a beer, then she stands up. She walks to the front of the stage. She starts dancing, looking crazy, shaking her head, moving her hips and jumping. She sweats, but feels alive in her confused environment.
Daniel stares at her attracted, studying the details. She wears a very slim vest that reveals her tiny and young breast, some shorts that show her pale legs; her red hair is messy, she holds a leather bag. The way she wears her closes is not accidental. She had paid attention to each detail: it is detectable by giving a look to the belt and the shoes that are perfectly matching.
The musician takes a rest and she goes back to the table. She takes a breath. She opens the menu, examines it, then snaps it shut and lays it on the table. She has actually no need to open it. She already knows what to order. She asks the waitress for another beer. She raises her eyes from the table and looks at the young man sitting in front of her. Their eyes meet each other. His thinness makes him look elegant, his eyes are blue and he has very black and long hair clashing. The features of his face are so perfect that he seems made of a cold perfection. His beard is not shaved, making him appear a little bit more ordinary. He looks at Tracy’s red and perfect drawn lips. She feels embarrassed and she tries to look at around, but he doesn’t stop gazing at her. The band starts playing again and she finds an excuse to move herself away from his eyes. She goes far from him. She goes to the band and she drinks the iced beer. She trembles when she feels a warm hand on her shoulder. She is afraid to turn her head towards the person who’s touching her. Someone over passed her privacy frontier. She is motionless, thinking that the hand had been pasted on her shoulder for too many seconds. She would like to move fast and to push away that feeling. At the same time she hopes that the hand’s owner would be the man who looked at her few seconds ago. She turns on the opposite side from the presence she feels, without taking a glance. She puts the beer on a table and she takes the exit. She goes out from Charly’s and the doors close behind her. Tracy walks fast. It’s very hot in Manhattan, where people are condemned not to sleep and to look for a answer in their own life. She turns right at the corner and crosses the 47th. She stops next her house’s door. She sits downs on the stairs of her Colonial house to smoke a cigarette. She looks for the lighter in the bag without finding it; maybe she forgot it in the bar. She stands up and checks better her pockets. Nothing. She sits down without any hope and she puts again the cigarette inside the package. She feels again the already known warm at her right side. Once again a hand shows her a lighter. Now she looks at the man who owns blue iced eyes, they are deep like the sea. He says “hi” and smiles. He puts his Gibson next to the stairs and sits down close to her. Their eyes meet one more time, trying to discover each others. There is silence between them and they feel embarrassed. You can feel only the street’s noise. It’s fucking hot in the Manhattan, choked by skyscrapers and by people looking for a new unexpected date.
ANNA VALENTE

2 commenti:
Ciao...forse non leggerai questo commento (noto che da un po' non aggiorni il tuo blog) ma voglio farti ugualmente i complimenti, perché è un "luogo" simpatico, ameno, dotato di framenti preziosi, come la struggente poesia di Prevert o il quadro klimtiano ed i tuoi stessi pensieri sparsi.
Un saluto da uno di passaggio...
Sono tornata per caso..sono.passati 12 anni. Quasi mi vergogno a ripercorrere le mie stesse emozioni. Scopro piacevolmente di aver incontrato occhi curiosi e chissà, che non possa tornare la voglia di scrivere. Grazie
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